October 18, 2019
Throughout the last essay I wrote, I used the word “metaphor” many many times. I guess a pattern that I can see is repetition of what I’m arguing. In a few places, I could find where I used transitions words and pointing words, but those were less frequent than the amount of times I repeated myself. In this essay, there are one or two paragraphs that are a bit hard to understand. In at least one of those paragraphs, I think using a transition phrase would help the flow of the previous paragraph to the one I’m focusing on.
Good. Self-knowledge is power! Keep up the good work!