September 24, 2019
After going through the revision process check list and comparing the questions with my essay, I’ve realized that there’s some work I need to do.
The first part would be “Writer as Driver”. I need to make my own ideas stand out just a bit more from all the words and I also need to connect my ideas to my thesis
The second would be “Organization”. This is something I usually struggle with when writing becuase I have so many thoughts and sometimes they don’t come out correctly on paper. I need to just go back and make sure my paragraphs are connected to each other, but that they have a different point.
The third is actually having the minimum amount of words. That’s the thing that I haven’t been able to reach quite yet.
The fourth and final thing that I really need to work on is the clarity. Yes, most of my sentences make sense when I read them to myself, but there are some that don’t make as much sense when someone else reads them. I know that there are a few sections that I need to work on so that’ll be what I do next.
